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Holidays

                                              Holidays

I found a crab and I decided to put it on my cousin's shoulder and
then he started to scream.

I felt pain when I got dumped on my head by my cousin's cousin.

I was curious about whether we would catch any fish today.

I heard kids yelling that there was a stingray in crystal clear water.

I smelt the salty blue sea while we were fishing at the
Maunganui wharf it was amazing.
How was your holiday?