w.a.l.t write a recount.
one hot day,we were all hyped up for our race.
when we got to Mrs cutlers farm we stared to
warm up. when they were starting the race
i got really nervous. Boom the gun went we
raced off!. year 4 cross country began.
every one was saving their energy.
we raced up the hill but we were getting tried
so we stared to walk. the others kept on running.
when i was coming down the hill i rolled
my ankle but i got up and kept on going
even though i came last.
Monday, 18 September 2017
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Great work Manaia
ReplyDeleteWOW Manaia i love your story
ReplyDeleteGreat story Manaia! It was very exciting !!
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