Friday 21 June 2019
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Bonjour,
ReplyDeleteI am Liana from Matawai School.
I really liked how you made it interesting for the reader by adding small humorous parts.
My favourite part was probably when the shark says cheese for the camera .
I learnt that emotive language is using wow words to hook your reader.
Maybe you could try to make the slides transition slightly faster when you press play.
How did you put the slides into your blog? Did you embed it in the blog post?
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Keep up the good work...
Au revoir
-Liana
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ReplyDeleteKia ora. I am Benjamin from Matawai School.
ReplyDeleteI really liked how it was an animation and it was funny.
I learnt that you need good words and a photo to make people read more.
Maybe you could use more photos to make people read more as you said in the slides.
How do you know all of these things about quility blogging?
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Mā te wā
Benjamin